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Miss typings, grammatical errors ...

Ayaveen (1) - 1. 12.03.16 15:55:12

Unfortunately we don‘t have a professional translator, and our English is pretty bad :(

If you‘ve found a mistake, or you can help us by correcting the texts all over Hokalovi post here!

We would appreciate any help!

(If you‘ve found an error, please don‘t forget to give us the url where you‘ve seen it)

Ayaveen (1) 12.03.16 15:55:12

(If you‘ve found an error, please don‘t forget to give us the url where you‘ve seen it)

iekev (15676) 12.04.10 20:58:14

Hi!I find a mistake in a forum title: “Fela market: itmes, equipments for sale“
It‘s flea market, and items, right?(sorry, i don‘t speak english very well...:/ )

Ayaveen (1) 12.04.11 17:25:55

Thank you iekev!

I‘ll correct it when I get home.

iekev (15676) 12.04.11 19:59:45

Ok, You‘re welcome, Ayaveen!^^ :)

iekev (15676) 12.04.11 21:04:13

I found another grammatical error. It‘s here:

pilots (58386) 12.04.16 16:44:19

Hi there! I found a grammatical error here:

(I speak english fluently, so I can spot out grammatical errors very well) (:

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Ayaveen (1) 12.04.16 21:24:41

Thank you everybody!

I‘ll start the corrections tomorrow.

Ayaveen (1) 12.04.17 21:49:04

Thank you again! :)

I‘ve collected the mistakes mentioned above!

ladybugjt (59300) 12.04.29 23:58:40

Hi! In the Quiz game you spelt Gallop wrong. You spelt it Galopp. The question was, When was the first National Gallop event in Hungary?

ladybugjt (59300) 12.04.30 00:19:22

Hi! In the Quiz game one of the questions was, What is colt. It is suppose to be what is a colt?

Ayaveen (1) 12.05.01 14:54:10

Thank you very much for your help!

We will correct these errors.

HorseLuvah (73855) 13.04.23 01:56:41

Hi!
I noticed that under the training section for your horse, the Obstacle Course is spelled “Obstakle“ it should be a “c“ instead of a “k“

Viw (5071) 13.07.06 21:23:13

I just found some miss typings in the Help menu. ~~Wrong word(s)~~ Correction Paragraph title

First, you wrote seperatedly in many places. As far a I know, it should be separately

Age and education of a horse: turns, plane of time and action points:
Don‘t forget, you can find plenty of useful tips in the Community House section of the forum (you can also ask questions about Hokalovi ~~tere~~ there)!

The quick turn system:
After you activated the function, the quick turn will be accessible at the bottom of your ~~hore‘s~~ horse‘s page.
Important: to use the quick turn, your horse need to have 15 free ~~aciton~~ action points, and it should be saddle trained.

Breaking in and taming horses:
The process of ~~beaking~~ breaking in and taming is very simple.
. It costs 15 action points, so in that turn there is nothing else to do, but don‘t forget ~~neccessary~~ necessary tasks in the horse‘s stall ( feeding, watering, cleaning stall).
It takes 1 - 1.5 years until you ~~succesfully~~ successfully tame your horse. When it ~~becomse~~ becomes saddle trained a lot of new options will be available for your horse.

Horse care: feeding, watering, cleaning stall...
If your horse is older than six months, clicking the Stall menu on your horse‘s care sheet you will be able to ~~acces~~ access 3 new options

Weight, energy and mood of your horse:
You have to feed your horses in every turn but also ~~excersie~~ exercise them a bit too, so they won‘t become bored or unhappy.
If your horse is too thin, do not push him too hard in your turn and do no forget to feed it ~~regurarly~~ regularly.
The energy of your horse affects whether it could ~~succesfully~~ successfully complete a task or not.
(~~Forgeting~~ Forgetting feeding, watering and stall cleaning also affects the mood of your horse)

Training, planning and starting your schedule
The aim of training and ~~excersizing~~ exercising is to increase the skill points of your horse and strengthen certain skills.
To build your own ~~trainin~~ training schedule you can find a lot of useful tip and information in the Community House part of the forum.
You should ~~strenghten~~ strengthen the skills required for the race you want to compete in.

Undertaking jobs in exchange for action points
Note: Working with crossbred horses, donkeys and mules results in a ~~higer~~ higher Zabszem income than with “normal“ horses. This three breed are considered working ~~horsesn~~ horses in the game.

Selling horse to other players or the village
If somebody buys a horse from you, it will be ~~transfered~~ transferred to it‘s new owner immediately, and the transaction will be shown in your office as an income.

Registering horse as a stud stallion:
If you register your horse as a stud stallion, you have the ~~oppotunity~~ opportunity to offer a private covering to only a certain player.
If you want to be ~~succesful~~ successful with your stud stallion, you have to make sure he has appealing skills and talent points (a good bloodline can be a plus too).

That‘s it.I‘m tired for now, and almost reached the character limit. I hope it‘s not a big deal, I‘ll continue it as soon as possible. I also hope I didn‘t fail with the formattings. xD

Hope I helped a bit, bye! \o

MysticMoon (94820) 15.09.06 08:09:17

Here is one:

Crossbred and purebred horses:
If you breed horses from the same breed, the foal will be of this breed too. (the only exception is the unizus, in this case the breed of your foal isn‘t guaranteed)
If you mate horses from different breeds, the horse will be a crossbred. Please note, if you cross a donkey with a horse, their offspring will be a mule.
(In some cases if you cross a ~~pegazus~~ Pegasus and an unicorn, the foal may become an unizus, but this isn‘t guaranteed either)
There are no difference between crossbred or purebred horses in skillpoints or performance (but in some cases crossbreds can‘t enter special competitions). The only notable difference is the fact that crossbred horses have a job bonus. If you spend their action points on jobs, they will get +50 Zsz. bonus each time! (This compensates the fact that they can‘t enter every race)

ChippyCho (96115) 16.01.01 13:48:02

Is it supposed to be “you may catch one“? Under Hoka stud and asylum?

http://lonevelde.lovasok.hu/hokalovi.php?lang=en&lap=5

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